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Hi Nalga, I'm glad you enjoyed the storyline! I'm certainly aiming to up my game in terms of cinematography as I get better at this. This was one of the first film shoots we ever did and given my lack of experience I am rather proud of it. The only way is up :)
In terms of the post-spanking fondling, Thomas respected Zille's limits on the day and I would not have it any other way. They had only just met, after all. (Besides, of course it's unfinished - they're interrupted halfway through!)
Thanks for the comment, it's great to hear feedback and I hope other users will feel able to give their honest reactions so I can know how to improve as a producer.