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Pandora, you are just great when you act those scenes where you know you havent been doing chores in time and try nervously to talk it away! Like with the serious, German accountant. There you are a natural (because you know in r.l. you are always behind with everything, by the standards you set for yourself?) So I enjoyed that, it was funny, at least for a while. Maybe in future dialogues there occurs a sudden twist, when new facts are disclosed? (Steal and borrow some and make changes... hsssh.)
You are good at improvising dialoge over a basic script.